The Horse Park

This post is an English assignment that I gave Nicole (7). She was to write about her recent trip to the horse park that she took with her sister and dad. I'm going to type it as it was written so that you can get the full affect.

La Marquesa

There wan's was a girl named Nicole. She was so exitede beucus she was going to La Marquesa! It's were you ride horses. Allso it was her frst time rideing a horse by her self. She went with her sister and dady. They got in the van and drove for an awr. They finly got there! They were so exited! They lookt aroud but ther were no horses. So they got bak in the van and they drove to the othor side of La Marquesa. They found tuns of baches of peple with horses. They were shouting "take my horse, take my horse! Dady took a huymunges brown horse! Nicole took a buytiful brown and white horse! They started to ride. Then a man sead to Nicole's sister do you want to galup? Yes sead the sister. The man seaad the brown and white hose is faster. So Nicole and her sister traded. Now Nicole has a black hose and her sister had the brow and white horse. Her sister started to galup until they cood not see her. Then Nicole got ustoe troting. They got uot of the woods and they sol a beutiful hil. Nicol's sister stated to galup agen and Nicole started to trot ugen. The horses wen't up the hil and they stated to eat. They they went daun the hil. Nicole and her sister sol sheep and two horses. They sol puppys. They started to bark at dady's and Nicole's and sisters horses. They started to go bak and a feuw mits later they were bak. They lookt for a pase to eat and then they foud a plas to eat. After aet they hiking. They went aroud in scrls and thay came bak. They sol a tire swine. Nicole and her siter swen on it togedor. They Nicole swen solo. Then her sister swen solo and then Nicole. And then they went home in the van. They took pikshers and vidyos. They were home! They toled the story to ther mom.
The End.

(I'm impressed with this story that Nicole has written. It still shows evidence of having been educated in Spanish the first half of this school year. It is interesting which person she wrote it in. She worked so hard on this and she spent at least an hour on the assignment. This is something that will go in her school folder that we will treasure for years to come!!